Grooming Metal
Do you think the poem I wrote good?
Dun dun Dunda Someday all you hear is the piano while walking down the aisle in their accounts silky cream dress, holding red roses bright color while the groom is waiting at the altar of his black tuxedo, looking sharp as a knife, and people in their seats looking their best as his first prom, as I look around I see a glass sculpture bright as sunshine in metal.-One day I would like everyone looking at me thinking the same thing
I'm not big on criticizing the work of others, but this is not what I would call "good." I like the structure, but this poem is very short and dry. No emotion or creativity involved. Revision is the key.
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